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Shigure_nii-san, 17 Nov 2005 04:55 pm

so, whatcha think? I just colored it and it only took...2 HOURS!!! does it look like its rainin in the pic? neat little trick eh?

Shigure_nii-san, 17 Nov 2005 06:31 pm

These are two characters from a story I'm coming up with! once i have it up i'll send you's a url cause it's gonna be on a different site!

unknown_Hunter, 17 Nov 2005 07:00 pm

hmmm Art style isn't bad. Very anime-ish, yet the colors chosen don't work with anime. Overall they came out pretty well. It doesn't really look like rain because when you put the NOISE filter on...you didn't Monochrone it. Also, I noticed the hands on the umbrella seem to be, well.. It seems like he's closing his hand and the umbrella is in back of his hand just floating. Try making the fingers start at the top of the umbrella handel and not under it.(Since when you you hold an umbrella with your fingers flat?) The end result came out pretty nice though and you're pretty good with proportions.

Can't wait to see the rest.

mathguy7777, 17 Nov 2005 08:39 pm

Improvement Since I have seen some of your other drawings, I can say that this is somewhat improved over many of your other pictures. I feel I must concur with unknown_Hunter in his commentary, and I too had some trouble seeing the rain effect, but it was there anyway. By the way, you know me in real life. Keep drawing to become great, and if you can't, get as close as possible! It was an overall good picture.

Shigure_nii-san, 18 Nov 2005 08:10 am

...of course I know you in real life, your name is the same as your e-mail address, thanks sensei! I need your help so i can add a link to my forum from the comic, you know HTML stuff...can you help?

Shigure_nii-san, 18 Nov 2005 08:14 am

how do the colors not fit? I don't understand...I didn't know i had to monochrome it, I'm new at using photoshop....and hands always mess with m e....*cries* Im good at proportions? I usually am no good at that.........Oh, and could i do a holiday comic or will people get offended?

Kayonoi, 19 Nov 2005 01:53 pm

Whee! It's awesome! :3

I love the comic, and you! <3

darknessfairy29, 20 Nov 2005 08:27 pm

XDDD It looks better n.n But man, those pants are BRIGHT XDDD kinda like the ones I have >333 but I like em :winkwink: But...that yellow outline of the title...kinda..isnt even so it kills the title O_X;;; Yack Yack..I like to critisixe XDDDD e.e Bad habbit of mine U.U

Anywhose <33333 NYA!!!

Shigure_nii-san, 22 Nov 2005 07:46 am

Oooh, me likies the fan art! I'll post it as soon as possible so look forward to it! And thanks for the critique!

XoxLEVIAxoX, 22 Nov 2005 09:00 am

I love the kitty.
You have really improved too!

Shigure_nii-san, 22 Nov 2005 09:11 am

Really?! 5\/\/337|\|355!!! (sweetness)

esper, 14 Dec 2005 10:56 am

hm Sorry if you see me steal the "fabric texture for rain" technique and use it in my comic, but it's really neat!

Shigure_nii-san, 15 Dec 2005 08:24 am

There are all kind of techniques like that at polykarbon.com It's a how to draw tutorial. ANd it's got photoshop stuff

mathguy7777, 16 Dec 2005 08:55 pm

Holiday Comic If you can talk about Halloween, with both Pagan and Catholic Origins, you should be able to talk about any Holiday you choose. Besides, reading about evolution doesn't offend me as a Christian. Why should reading about Christmas, which is also celebrated (although not with the same meaning) by some atheists and agnostics, be such a horrible thing?

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